Fitzy

Fitzy

i love putting work on the wiki - I'm glad Fitzy!!! Not out with Berta tonight???



im defiently a frequent wiki user now Very impressive Fitzy. I've had a look and here are a few suggestions:  //Ben it’s important that you use direct references from the text. See if you can include some of the key words and ideas into your explanation to make it more explicit. Don’t fall into the habit of retelling or translating the text. You’re analysing it, breaking it down word by word. What you’ve done is fine but you need to go deeper, explain where exactly the themes are in the text. How do you know Hamlet is disgusted in his mother? What part of the text tells you this? How are the themes of lies and deceit conveyed? You need to justify your interpretations. 1250069928//

just making one of my regular wiki contributions Good to see Fitzy, you make some interesting observations in this CA. I'll print it out, comment and hand it back Friday. Good to see you've lifted the workrate! 1250677312